Friday, March 6, 2009

Summary (paragraph E)

(Page 77)

There are many advantage and disadvantage about telecommuting. An advantage of this is saves the stress of commuting to the workplace. Also, there is disadvantage it is difficult for some people to focus on work at home. They like to have a break from their life.

My opinion about telecommuting

(On page85 in reading book)
There are many advantage and disadvantage about telecommuting. One drawback of this is it is difficult to focus on work at home because of TV. Also, there are many advantage such as communicate by computer and telephone and technology. For examples, it saves the stress of commuting to the workplace. In my opinion, I think in the future telecommuting will be an occupation. The people who work at home are self confidence because they do not need any support from other employers.

Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Haiku poetry


I’m very happy


Today is wonderful day


But it is has fog

How will you improve your grades from last semester?

Final draft

How will you improve your grades from last semester?

Although first semester was a good experience and successful. I hope to improve my English to get a high marks so l plan to work harder than semester one. I think it will to improve my grade, to take many courses at the college. There are many ways to improve my grades from last semester such as reading English stories and watching English movies.

The first point to improve my mark this semester will be to watch English movies. At the beginning, I chose two strategies to improve my language skills and to get higher marks. The First strategy is watching English movies every weekend. Therefore, I will see two movies per week. For example, Iwill see movies on Thursday and on Friday. Also, I will see the English movies without Arabic translation on the Internet and any word or part I did not understand well, I will play again and write down the words or phrase to memorize it later.

Secondly, reading stories are one of my plans to improve my language in the second semester. So, I will read English stories from the library in my free time at college or at my home. For that reason, I planned to read short stories then longer stories and I will highlight any word I did not understand. After that, I will summarize it. Finally I will show it to someone. For example, my partner will check it after I finished.

In conclusion, watching English movies and reading English stories are some ways for improve my language in the second semester. I hope these will be useful strategies to achieve my goals.

How will you improve your grades from last semester?

Draft2

How will you improve your grades from last semester?

Although first semester was a good experience and successful. I hope to improve English to get a high mark so l plan to work harder than semester one. I think to improve my grade, to take many courses at college. There are many ways to improve my grades from last semester such as reading English stories and watching English movies.

The first point to improve my mark this semester will be to watch English movies. At the beginning, I chose two strategies to improve my language skills and to get higher marks. First strategy is watching English movies every weekend. Therefore, I will see two movies on two days at week. For examples, on Thursday and on Friday. Also, I will see the English movies without Arabic translation by the internet and any word or part I did not understood it well, I will play again and write down to memorize it later.

Secondly, reading stories one of my plans to improve my language on the second semester. So, I will read English stories from library in my free time at college or at my home. For that reason, I planned to read short story then longer story and I will highlight any word I did not understand. After that, I will summarize it. Finally I will show it to someone. For example, my partner to check it.

In conclusion, watching English movies and reading English stories are some ways for improve my language on a second semester. I hope to be useful strategies to achieve my goals.

How will you improve your grades from last semester?

Draft1
A process writing

How will you improve your grades from last semester?

Although first semester was good experience and successful. I hope to improve myself on English to get high make so, l planned to work harder than semester one. I think to improve my grades to take many courses. There are many reasons to improve my grades in last semester such as read English stories and watch English movies.