Draft 1
In the UAE have big population and many changes. For examples, in Dubai has developing such as too much festival and exhibition so they attract many people to visit Dubai. Some people like to see many developing. There are two main effects for big population here in the UAE.
The first effect is traffic. Nowadays, Dubai has much traffic because it has many building and developing. Also, traffic nowadays has increase because it is too much tourism in Dubai. Moreover, Dubai has much accident because it has a lot of transportation, we have a lot of cars and taxis, and we have a lot of accidents in Dubai. The UAE is a good place for festival and shopping but it will have a lot of crowded in festival. Moreover, the festival in Dubai is one of most attention which attracts a lot of foreigners. However, when we have a lot of foreigners we will have social issue such as crime and disease. Also, we will have a big population.
There are many problems that affect that world today. Another effect is pollution such as cars and factories. When there are a lot of cars the pollution increase and this causes disease. Also, the factory has some effects.
In conclusion, there are many effects for big population here in the UAE such as traffic and pollution. Dubai has big population and developing. Also, there are many problems that affect
that world.
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Draft2
The UAE has a big population and many changes. For examples, Dubai is development and there are many festivals and exhibitions so they attract many people to visit Dubai. Some people like to see much development. There are two main effects for a big population here in the UAE.
The first effect a large population is traffic. Nowadays, Dubai has much traffic because it has many buildings and developments. Also, traffic nowadays has increased because there is much tourism in Dubai. Moreover, Dubai has many accidents because it has a lot of transportation, we have a lot of cars and taxis, and we have a lot of accidents in Dubai. The UAE is a good place for festivals and shopping, but it will have a lot of crowded festivals. Moreover, the festivals in Dubai are one of most attractions which bring a lot of foreigners. However, when we have a lot of foreigners we have social issues such as crime and disease. As a result of many foreigners, we will have a big population and this increases our traffic.
The other affects it a large population in UAE is pollution. Another effect is pollution cause from cars and factories. When there are a lot of cars the pollution increase and causes disease such as respiratory system. Also, the factory has some effects. Air Pollution comes from many different sources and can affect many different things. The effects of air pollution are not only destroying to people, but they can kill animals, fish, and birds.
In conclusion, there are many effects for a big population here in the UAE such as traffic and pollution. Dubai has big population and is developing. A big population gives us some problem with traffic including accident and crowded. Pollution is another problem and it affects our heath and air quality.
The first effect a large population is traffic. Nowadays, Dubai has much traffic because it has many buildings and developments. Also, traffic nowadays has increased because there is much tourism in Dubai. Moreover, Dubai has many accidents because it has a lot of transportation, we have a lot of cars and taxis, and we have a lot of accidents in Dubai. The UAE is a good place for festivals and shopping, but it will have a lot of crowded festivals. Moreover, the festivals in Dubai are one of most attractions which bring a lot of foreigners. However, when we have a lot of foreigners we have social issues such as crime and disease. As a result of many foreigners, we will have a big population and this increases our traffic.
The other affects it a large population in UAE is pollution. Another effect is pollution cause from cars and factories. When there are a lot of cars the pollution increase and causes disease such as respiratory system. Also, the factory has some effects. Air Pollution comes from many different sources and can affect many different things. The effects of air pollution are not only destroying to people, but they can kill animals, fish, and birds.
In conclusion, there are many effects for a big population here in the UAE such as traffic and pollution. Dubai has big population and is developing. A big population gives us some problem with traffic including accident and crowded. Pollution is another problem and it affects our heath and air quality.
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